Saturday, November 21, 2009

A Piece of RD of Rhetorical Project

The topic for my rhetorical project is building international relationships is important among peoples. And the relationships are built through individual efforts are more effective than government efforts is my argument. The article is not only a simple piece of persuasive essay, and yet it will be more than a persuasive paper so that I can reach the goal of call for action in physically support and join programs, which are great help for building relationships among people.

To determine my argument is effective or not is depending on my proofs, which means I have to discuss why governments sometimes cannot lead us in a right way to build relationships with others, or why we cannot simply rely on governments. There is no doubt that all citizens should support their governments, and those policies issued by governments. Or just leave the country. We can confidently believe that our governments are thinking of us. They are trying to protect us and making benefit for us. But I do not think they are doing good job in leading people to build good relationships with others.

Governments have absolute powers, which are over their citizens. They are leading the roads where they are going. And their citizens have no choice. People sometimes cannot get the truth from their governments, or some major media. Just like governments start wars, which means they break up relationships with other countries, so their peoples. Why they fight? Why they have argument? It is so wrong to look for truth from governments. Something that is you cannot tell.

People may get misunderstood by governments and media. There is no way to judge what they say is right or wrong. It is always effective to get something from their citizens. Talk to ordinary people, which is the most effective way to study other histories or cultures. Mar 14th, 2008, incident of violence happened in Tibet. I know it was the toughest moment for Chinese government. People were all listening to Dalai Lama rather than trying to know what exactly it was in Tibet. Newspapers and major internet websites were reporting fake news to the world. At least for Chinese were fake. Probably, only we Chinese knew what exactly it was at that moment. Or I would like to tell them the truth if someone ask me about it in the future. I want to prove my government did it in a right way.

Ordinary people are more easy to approach or they are easily motivated to learn something from others, such as language, cultures and countries. I think ordinary people should not have argument because we want to build mutual trust, cooperation and understanding even though the relationships among countries are not as harmony as we think. Some problems governments cannot solve, which are more rely on our ordinary people. The relationships among countries are not representing the relationships of different peoples. They can be improved by individual efforts.

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